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The Eighth Plain ~Excitement!

Journal Entry: Wed Apr 30, 2008, 5:12 PM
I'm very excited for my newly created story; "The Eighth Plain." I've had plenty of views for it, and an acceptable amount of comments! A lot of people seem to like it, and I love it just as well. I can't get the story out of my head. I've probably thought of half of the story already, just from everyday life! I also figured I'd feature a few fans of mine who've commented and enjoyed my work so far. They deserve recognition, as many people often do!

Anyway, I've also found the secret to actually writing a decent manga. There are a large number of certain elements you need to have in a story before it can even be considered a decent manga. I'm not saying "The Eighth Plain" has all the elements it needs, but it certainly has quite a few that I've discovered and administered.

It involves an intellegent school kid who happens upon a strange bow and an empty quiver. He takes it home, and decides to buy arrows for it later on, though to his surprise the quiver is filled with arrows the next morning. No later does he run to his rooftop and try it out on the unsuspecting clouds hovering in the sky. He resorts to random items and popcans on people's distant rooftops and finds his accuracy improving. It's not too long until he spies a strange pitch black bunny about one rooftop away. He prepares his bow and arrow tightly, pulling it back and pausing before making his attempted strike. Though little did he know, releasing that arrow would be the end to a normal fate.

So, I figured I'd feature my fans so far, or, well, the people who've recently read and enjoyed the story. They're great deviants as well, so people should check out their stuffs!

:iconmikan-remon: :iconlycan-rising: :iconrebelteen135: :iconlucrecia89:

And plenty of non-deviant art folks! I feel that with time the story should get more popular, but no matter what, fame or unfortune, I won't forget about those first few fans who showed me that what I'm doing is not a waste of time!

I got this from ~FunnyBunny-Stock [link]

The first ten people who post in this journal will be featured. I will go though your gallery and post three of your deviations in my journal for everyone to see. In return you must post this in your journal as well.
If you already have a recent "10 features" in your journal, you can link to that instead.

1. :iconmikan-remon:
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2. :iconstudent-4-ever:
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3. :iconrebelteen135:
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I've also been tagged, though I've been a little too busy to commence with the whole tagged tradition... I'll try slithering my way to it eventually. ><;

  • Mood: Lmao
  • Listening to: Linkin Park
  • Reading: Goosebumps!!!
  • Watching: You O.O
  • Playing: Um.. Halo 3!!
  • Eating: This really fancy meal that you can't afford.
  • Drinking: Refer to eating.

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 16
  • Interests: Manga, anime, my T.V. Friends, and writing.
  • Favourite movie: The new Halloween
  • Favourite band or musician: linkin park
  • Favourite genre of music: rock
  • Favourite poet or writer: Masashi if mangaka counts
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • Favourite game: GOW2
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox 360
  • Favourite cartoon character: Naruto, rocklee, Gaara, Ichigo, Neji. It goes on from there..

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=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Oct 10, 2008, 6:30:57 PM
Yes I agree...I have grown pretty distant here on DA myself which I do not like but I simply lack the will to put effort into it any longer and don't feel like it si worth the effort if people won't appreciate it...It wares then on my emotions, which have been so screwed up lately I don't know what the hell I'm gonna do anymore..and I am beginning to scare myself cause I don't like what I'm turning into..Buty it feels like i'm losing control over it all and I don't know the reason but I care less and less everyday..ehich is not like me...

I mean when I read work and fav it I rarely comment on it..I mean I know I should but well I just lack to the motivation to do it any longer when I rarely get anything in return...If my emotions werre so tangeled in my life situations I might actually cxare enough to leave a good and nice compliment and critique but well I feel like it is no longer worth it cause well my emotions are fried and I just lost my ability to care as much anymore..

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~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Oct 10, 2008, 6:21:31 PM
Ooh, thanks for your concern~ I know what you mean, I make it an effort a lot of the time to reward those who deserve it with a well thought out and thorough critique, with the small hope in mind that others will do the same for me. I know the one thing I've deserved the most while being on dA was a long, well thought out and extremely story involved critique by one of my proud works. Though usually I'm only given a one to two word post by very few people, even when I've worked so hard on it. I feel that giving the community more than I receive justifies my character a lot by some means.

But, being a writer myself, I know that most people tend to get excited over their writing, and eager to hear something deep and involved when it comes to what they've written. They really want to know what parts the reader enjoyed, what parts may they have liked, dislike, got excited about or felt emotion about. I know I wonder all the time how my writing effects others. I just feel like, reading something so deep should give you twice as many things to say about it, it'd be hard for me to read something and leave a two word post about how it was. Maybe I just talk too much, or maybe I'm too compassionate, but I love making people feel good, even if they don't do the same for me in return. That's a lot of the reason why I critique. So I can understand how you feel when people don't say much when responding, or don't respond at all. It can get frustrating over long periods of time.

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I'm part of Project Reciprocation

~The Eighth Plain [link]
=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Oct 10, 2008, 5:31:31 PM
I was just wondering what happened to you..wanted to know if things are ok..I mean I have a lot of watchers now but few actually cared enough to take the timne you did to critique and compliment

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Powitanie, Aлло, 今日は, Hallå, Abyssus, γειά, Hola, Salve, Bonjour, Hallo, Olá
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Oct 10, 2008, 12:38:25 PM
Lols, kinda stopped coming to dA as much due to changes in life schedules and stuff. I'd love to hang around here more, and enter stories of my own as well as critique others, and I'll try to once I get a few things cleared up. Thanks for the compliment~ I'll definitely come back with another critique for you very soon~

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I'm part of Project Reciprocation

~The Eighth Plain [link]
=CletusJackson:iconCletusJackson: Oct 9, 2008, 10:48:41 AM
Where you been at I miss you Man you gave great critiques

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~Kada-chan:iconKada-chan: Jul 11, 2008, 8:48:49 PM
Xhinkaiyuuuuuu~!

^^ Hey, like I mentioned in my comment, I'm sorry I haven't been on in a while. The time I did have was very short.

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Dracula and Lestat, owning the f**k out of "Edward Cullen" since 1431 and 1755, respectively. Don't mess with your betters. ~ Anafiel

I laughed.
~Sasameisme31:iconSasameisme31: Jun 5, 2008, 7:21:48 PM
ohzzzz do you have a youtube???I do

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Arashi?What?Yeah.Their hot.
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Jun 5, 2008, 6:36:11 PM
Nah, a lot of people use this icon XD

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I'm part of Project Reciprocation

~The Eighth Plain [link]
~Sasameisme31:iconSasameisme31: Jun 5, 2008, 5:36:39 PM
Hey BTW!!!!This person on youtube has the same icon that you have and shes from Australia and she has a vid of Naruto wind ending 1 are yo that person???

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Arashi?What?Yeah.Their hot.
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Jun 5, 2008, 5:16:27 PM
Yeah, it's really kool by my standards. ^^

I can't stop thinking of the story. I love writing it and many love reading it.

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I'm part of Project Reciprocation

~The Eighth Plain [link]
~Sasameisme31:iconSasameisme31: Jun 4, 2008, 7:55:19 PM
awsome1!!Yeah I need to read your first one to know what the eight plain is

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Arashi?What?Yeah.Their hot.
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Jun 4, 2008, 7:17:31 PM
Thanks! I do as well. ^^

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I'm part of Project Reciprocation

~The Eighth Plain [link]
~Sasameisme31:iconSasameisme31: Jun 2, 2008, 6:19:00 PM
You draw really good.I do literature.

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Arashi?What?Yeah.Their hot.
*Drakague:iconDrakague: May 7, 2008, 3:19:39 PM
Thanks for the watch! ^^;

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Rabbitzan: :sprint: ( <--this is why a Rabbitzan is not to be allowed free range!! )

*student-4-ever:iconstudent-4-ever: Apr 11, 2008, 12:05:02 PM
:highfive:

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*student-4-ever:iconstudent-4-ever: Apr 10, 2008, 6:49:14 PM
thanks for adding me to your friends list! :D

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~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Apr 2, 2008, 3:30:56 PM
Thanks, glad you like it!
~Schwartz-PKKer:iconSchwartz-PKKer: Apr 2, 2008, 5:20:09 AM
Inu Baretto, checking in,lol. Good stuff,good stuff.

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~yamakuzy:iconyamakuzy: Mar 28, 2008, 12:42:55 AM
lol, your stick manga
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Mar 27, 2008, 2:19:38 PM
Thanks dude, glad you liked it. (Not sure if you're refering to the stick manga or the literature though. lol)
~yamakuzy:iconyamakuzy: Mar 26, 2008, 7:19:54 AM Mood: Eager
kewl stuff xhin ^o^
cant wait for the next one
~andy1229:iconandy1229: Feb 13, 2008, 10:55:53 PM
thanks for adding me^_^
~Xhinkaiyu:iconXhinkaiyu: Feb 12, 2008, 4:59:30 PM
Definately. And no problem. ^^
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